Walt: using descriptive language .
Intro :
Dear Helper’s and Staff and Volunteers . I would like to say a BIG THANK - YOU to you for making this happen and for this Fun Sporty Opportunity for Athletics day at Pt England School . 
Paragraph 1 :
Athletics day was held at Pt England School . It was full of different kinds of Sporty and Fun events for the whole school to participate all in . there was events like sprinting , high jump , Discus , relay , volleyball , javelin and much more events . it was really great to have athletics on a sunny bright day .
Paragraph 2 :
To be honest my favourite part was participating and having fun with my friends doing all different kinds of athletic events . Also I was really proud of the green team and they are 5 girls because when it came to a teamwork thing we had work or together and they had won some events on athletics . But mostly I enjoyed it and had a great day doing athletics .
Paragraph 3 :
Next Year I would like to help set up Athletics Next Year with my Amazing Friends . Also I will be training at home to get better and better and do my best on the Events . I am pretty sure that Next year for athletics is going to be hard I guess ???? .
Conclusion :
To Be honest I had enjoyed my day when Pt England School did Athletics . I enjoyed Athletics because I had a Good time with my Friends and Teachers doing Athletics and getting this sporty opportunity and I have learned a lot of things . Once again I would like to say a BIG THANK YOU to Helper’s and Staff and Volunteers .
Task Description :
Room 7 Litcery had done some Writing this task was for everyone who had came to the Manaiakalani Film Festival and Athletics Day . Thank you to all the Helper's than came along on Both Events . I had Deiced to do both but Manaiakalani Film Festival First because it happened first then last but not least I had Saved the Athletics Thank you Writing for Last . Really Hope you enjoy my Writing !!! .
