Manakalani Short Summary Recount !

Take Back to Week 5 on a Wednesday the whole Pt England went to Hoyts in Sylvia Park! Keep in mind the school when in different times to Hoyts. The year 6 , 7 & 8 when in the morning and the rest of the school went later near lunchtime. We were in the van the other van over took us and we all laughing even when Mr J was playing the song and moving closer while going up and down and it was funny as hell !I was one of the presenters for Room 5's Movie "Give" I wasn't that nervous but I learnt to have confidence on stage while talking to everyone! After my favourtive movie had to be "Sharpen Up" because it was super funny and my favourtive part had to be when Jazzelle threw the Vase to Paschal and it broke !!! Overall it was a cool experience and I can't wait for next years Manakalani Film Festival 2020!

Task Description : For this task I was suppose to write about what happened on the trip on Wednesday but because I didn't go I had to write an short recount about the Manakalani Film Festival so here it is !

Expressions

Task Description : Last week Room 1 litcery was learning on how to  Identify and evaluate an author's purpose and how to show emotions when reading! This task was based on ourselfs and to show the line we picked and to express ourselfs to that line and say it 8 times so 4 positive and 4 Bad! Keep in mind this work was last weeks work !

Mystical Adventure Part 1 - Keyhole Narrative Writing

Mystical Adventure Part 1 

It was a typical walk while the beautiful sun was setting through the Island of Macoryin located in Russia . Josh and Joseph wanted to explore and have an adventure throughout Russia . As Lina , Josh , Melissa and Joseph were having a good time , Josh caught a gleam of an eye catching his attention as he yelled out “ Guys come look what I found! “ As they all came running back to Joseph , Lina  was shocked and wondered to herself how come its so dark ? Melissa & Josh was keen to go in but they didn’t know about the others whether they wanted to or not , so Melissa asked the whole group “ Do you’s want to go in because me and Josh wanna 

“ With in fear Lina said  I don't know guys “

“ Joseph said yup Im keen “ 

With the whole group all keen to go inside they all awaited for Lina but then Joseph said “ Its Alright Lina you’ll be fine just stick with me “

Lina Replied “ Okay thx ”

As they all took a couple of steps into the dark tunnel they couldn’t see anything since it was really pitch dark black ahead of them . But until Lina tumbled Joseph caught her they both looked each other in the eye but then Josh and melissa said “ Oshhhh Come on you two its not a love story “ giggling a bit 

“Coming” said Lina ( blushing ) and Joseph 

They all thought they were getting nowhere until Josh spotted a light ahead of him and said “ Look there’s a hint of light “ 

They all ran towards it but then they all said with supsioucnest “ What’s that ? “

They all looked at each other awkwardly like they never looked at each other before , They took step by step moving slowly towards the weird looking ship with a part of land leaving a big hole for several eyes to see . They all wonder what should they do so so they all jump and they all barley made it into the ship and once they opened the door and took a couple of steps the door closed on its own!

How could that have happened ?

Task Description : This week our task was based on another narrative meaning we are trying to get better and better at writing narratives and picking different kinds of topics and making our stories more interesting . We had to tell what will happen in our story and weather if there are one whole story or weather there will be parts towards our story. Don't forget to stay tuned for Part 2 coming very soon !

Narrative Planning

Task Description : This week this task was based on planning before we write our narrative meaning to sort out our characters , setting and whats our problem and resolution. This was an short task we had to plan out to before writing . The writing that I will be writing is an Narrative and will be uploaded tomorrow!

Complex Sentences

Task Description : This week Room 1 is focusing and getting better on how to write complex sentences. This week was due last week but since I didn't come on that day today was the last day to finish it off and I had to stay focus and finish it today which I did !!!

~ Museum Summary Recount ~

~ Museum Summary Recount ~

Last week on friday the 1st of november was the official day the whole team 5 went to the Auckland War Memorial Museum . Travelling in the bus full with Team 5 there was a lot of people in the back of the bus singing and it was pretty cool . We finally reached the Museum and we were the last bus to get there even though we went first ! We all had to sit down and go in our groups with our KPMG Helper and EXPLORE the Museum.

My highlight of the trip to the Museum had to be where Me , Maree , Tatiana and Jozolo and Sefa ( Maree , Jozolo & Tatiana’s Helper from KPMG ) were supposed to go to the Memorial Garden near the Auckland Museum but instead we all asked to sit in the middle of the field and chill out and have a bit of sleep and eat more and sefa said yup . So we all sat down in a circle and Tatiana played some music and we all jamming and singing  well some of us were laughing and eating and other stuff to be honest it was pretty lit the funny part was when the other groups walked passed us to go in the Memorial Garden look at us and it was crack up .  

Explanation structure Writing ( How to be an good daughter )

How To be an good Daughter 

Do you have what it takes to become a better daughter to your parents? In this Explanation writing I am going to explain how YOU could be a good Daughter to your Parents meaning what you could do , have a better stronger bond and relationship with them and how you should act .

Our Hard working parents provide things for us in life and make our lives the best it could be. They work very hard in order to make some money for the family and feed us well but in reality there really tired and exhausted from work  but still put on a smile on their face . For an example, you could do some chores like cleaning because let's all admit a messy house makes a very angry parent.

Relationships and Bonds mean the world to our parents  .Bonds and relationships between a mother and daughter and father is unbreakable even tho you do naughty and bad stuff in the bottom of their heart they will always forgive and love you . For example, another way to create a better and stronger bond and relationship is too have a sense of humor , talk to them when you need someone to talk too also to spend more time with them when you can .

Respect is the key to having a good family . When acting around your parents you should never be disrespectful because your parents raised you and did loads of things , the way to act around your parents is to be respectful at all times no matter where you are . For an example if your parents smacked you they did it for a reason and you shouldn’t be mad at them because you had put it upon yourself so just move on and keep on respecting them like normally .

Now that you have read my story about “ How to be a good daughter “ do you have the inspiration or what it takes to be a good daughter ? This all Concules about my explanation about how to be a good daughter .

Task Description : This week we are learning how to Structure an explanation piece of writing correctly. This was a 2 day task to work on as because we had to write it properly and this whole topic was about how to be an good son / daughter .