As the thunderstorm shattered , the road started to crack , the teenage boy’s favourtive toy ( Number 28 ) came to life suddenly by the thunderstorm apparently it just randomly happened .
The boy was lefted frightened upon what had happened split seconds ago ! He wonders to himself “ Could the thunderstorm be cursed ? “ . As his favourtive toy ( Number 28 ) just kept on growing and growing and still it had finally stopped as once it was nearly as tall as the whole hotel ( Apartments ) The boy knew he had to do something about it before it does something!As Number 28 started taking steps to go somewhere suddenly the ground started shaking as because of how he was so much bigger than everyone else . The teenage boy had a plan and said “ What if the thunderstorm struck again at Number 28 maybe he would turn back to the original size it was at the start ? “ but there was only one problem how was the boy ever going to get the thunder to strike again at Number 28 ? So the Teenage boy decided to search up on google “ How to get thunder to strike at something “ there was the results ! All the boy had to do was get a piece of metal and reflect it to Number 28 !
As the teenage boy was finding a piece of metal seconds later he founded one so he got up and carried the big heavy metal outside as the thunder was still striking but he didn’t care all he wanted was to get his Number 28 back ! So as he finally reaches outside with the heavy big metal all lefted to do was to reflect it to Number 28 , As he placed the metal to Number 28 . Number 28 saw something reflecting at him and ran slowly towards it . The teenage boy was getting scared and was hoping for all the best .
To be continued ….
Task Description : This week we are learning how to gain an understanding of figurative language . By saying that we were given a short writing task . We only had about 40 minutes to write a short creative writing and see what we could how much we can write in a short amount of time about Number 28 .
Showing posts with label Writing 2019. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing 2019. Show all posts
Monday, 23 September 2019
Wednesday, 28 August 2019
Thesis Statement Writing
Task Description : This week for literacy we are learning to write a thesis sentence about an given statement . By saying that we were given an 5 statements to give an thesis statement about different types of topics .
Wednesday, 14 August 2019
NED Show ( Highlights )
Today later In the afternoon the whole school attended the NED Show !!! NED stands for N = Never Give up , E = Encourage Others and D = Do your best it was performed by Ned and Nicole !
The Whole show was about NED's Mindset Mission and what I mean by saying that was he was stuck on an problem and didn't know what to do do he went on an mission to find out what it was and a long the way NED and Nicole teached us some things about Life .
My highlight of the whole show had to be when we came in and sat all down and when she was showing us tricks with the NED Yoyo's and Magic trick too !!
The Whole show was about NED's Mindset Mission and what I mean by saying that was he was stuck on an problem and didn't know what to do do he went on an mission to find out what it was and a long the way NED and Nicole teached us some things about Life .
My highlight of the whole show had to be when we came in and sat all down and when she was showing us tricks with the NED Yoyo's and Magic trick too !!
Friday, 9 August 2019
School Hours Persuasive Writing
Meaning of Colors = Purple for Hook & Green for Opinion & Yellow for Reason’s & Blue for Examples/Facts .
Intro
Is school hours good that it's long or not ?
In my opinion school should start at 8:30am and finish at 3.00pm because its a reasonable time to end and finish school and you get a lot of Education done while your at school .
P1 Good -
Helping/Understanding
For an Example Some Kids seem to struggle on understanding there learning online and if there stuck they really need help but doesn’t know what to do they seem to sit there and not do anything , that's why most kids prefer to go to school and get help from a teacher face to face that way they can help the kids fully understand rather than being stuck and not getting anywhere .
Some online study sites that kids use some sites can’t really tell the kids on what they are actually looking for but on the other hand teachers help the kids when they need help instead of the kid searching for the missing information and killing time .
P2 Better -
Learning / Education
The Time period for school is good because the long hours of the school day helps the kids learn more and has a good shot at there future .
If the time period has been cut to shorter hours for the school days the kids may not be learning as much as you think they are the longer the day the more they learn but the shorter the day the less they will be able to learn new things but not only that in school we have morning tea and lunchtime and that cost up to nearly 2 hours of the whole school day and less time of learning .
Learning will never be a regret because as you grow up and wanting a career or a job you have the knowledge to get that job since you learnt a lot in school from the time period that you have for learning .
P3 Best -
Better Future
For an Example , having no Education by your side and haven’t learnt anything about learning that's a BIG regret because once you want a job you haven't study about it . Education is one of your important needs why you ask because it helps you get the job you want and if they ask you did you learn anything about that pariteler job and you already learnt about because you took the time to study about it .
Learning plays a BIG part of your life as you really need it not only for jobs and careers but also for your own goods and if your children need help on there homework you can help them as because you studied when you were supposed to and have the knowledge to do it .
Conclusion
At the end of it Education plays a big part in your life as I said , you really need to succeed in life or not to succeed in life either way it's your choice to pick whether you want to succeed or not . But in my Opinion every kid and adult should learn more and will have a bright future ahead of them and still to come!
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