I am a Year 5 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teachers are Miss Scanlan, Mr Goodwin, and Miss Parrant.
We are using adverbs to begin two sentences about The Duffy Show.
An adverb describes the way that we are doing something.
Excitedly we sat nicely and waited for the Duffy show to begin.
Loudly we all laughed and had a great time.
Your second sentence is fabulous Lillyana.Perhaps for your first sentence you have used one too many adverbs. By adding in "nicely" the sentence becomes a little trickier for your audience to follow.
Looks fun,hoped you and your class mates injoyed the school play
Hi lillyanaI love your cool work you have did in class I enjoyed it keep up the amazing work.love Aneelis
Keep it up lillyana I hope you are going to have so much fun at school.Love Aneelis
lillyana I hope that you are having so much fun in class.love Aneelis
Hi lillyanaI hope you have had a good amazing day today keep it up the work.Love Aneelis