An Miracle - Pre Test Narrative Writing - Choose It Writing

 An Miracle 

As Caldoria the ballerina was dancing gracefully on stage with her beautiful lyrical solo.

But as the producer awaiting on the side of the stage wanting to get her attention because something was urgent and she needed to go ASAP. Seconds later he finally got her attention she was dancing beautifully until something caught her eye so she had to rush off stage and she suddenly tripped over a prop that another dancer was using for her solo the judges asked if she was okay and Caldroia said “yes”. 

After she got to the producer told her the hospital rang and said you need to go because your dad is having a huge heart problem !!! As she ran with tears running down her face she was heartbroken she wonder if something worster was going to happen . After 25 minutes she got to the hospital the doctor located her to her grandpa’s room which was level 3 room 24 . Her grandpa wasn’t there untill the nurse said he is in the x ray room then after that he will go in the operations room for surgery Caldoria was SHOCKED she didn’t know that it was going to be like this . 

10 minutes later grandpa came back to his room and saw Caldoria sitting on the chair and Caldoria said “ Grandpa I’m sorry for all I’ve done and all I want now is for you to still live and too create more memoirs I love you Grandpa <3 “ Grandpa said “ I love you Caldoria <3 “ But then the nurse said I have good news for you “ Your grandpa is good to go and he doesn’t need to go for surgery but now but you just need to keep an eye out just in case this happens again!” Caldoria said “ Thank you Thank you for your hospitality looking after my grandpa “ The Nurse repiled “ No worries “ As Caldoria walked happily with her grandpa out the Auckland hospital and drove back to competion to see who made it to the grand finals .

As they got there Caldoria just made it and the Judges said the two grand finalist is….. Caldoria and Bella ! Caldoria was over the moon and said “ This day couldn’t was an miracle and a roller coaster ride for sure !!! “ then Caldoria said a Thank you speach and drove back home with her Grandpa and started choreographing another temporaly solo . 

To be Continued …..

#3 - Maths 2019 - Test Practice

WALT: do our best at the test by practicing word problems !

Task Description : This is my Test Practice for Maths Test why you ask well next week on Tuesday I think we are going to have our Maths test the whole reason was because Our Teacher ( Mrs IIaoa ) wanted us to Practice while the test is coming very soon , We had to answer Questions and solve them out . Hope you enjoy and Have a Happy 1st of March Night Everyone !!!!

Sponge Throwing at Our Teachers Writing Test

W.A.L.T = To Write a successful piece of a Recount

Today was the big day our writing test . Having a great fun time with my friends doing something every fun also strange. Wanna know more about what happened and what we did well keep on reading to find out some juicy things that happened .

Walking in two lines to the bottom field , Mr Somerville told the whole of Room Seven sat in front of the three green buckets and to make sure the lines were evenly spit . Then Room Eight came and sat in front of the three blue buckets in three evenly split lines , next Room Six came and sat in front of the Yellow bucket into three evenly split lines . After we all were here our teachers ( Mrs Parrant , Mrs Sio and Mr Goodwin ) got all ready . Mr Goodwin was wearing a snorkel mask and a snorkel on the side ,  Bright yellow flippers with socks . Then Mrs Parrant was wearing goggles so did Mrs Sio but then Mrs Sio had Kids Blow up thingy that goes on your arm and she had a pool thing and it looked cool . After that Mr Somerville explained the instructions which was to get the sponge from the bucket of water and make it soaking wet and throw it at our teacher , the most important instruction was to get good hits on our teacher and have fun , so then Mr Jacobson said to call us Executioner’s.

The time had begin so our teacher’s went to sit on the three grey chairs and then Mr Jacobson said said Executioner’s , so then the first person in each line had to stand up and make the sponge soaking wet and then Mr Somerville said throw so then the first hit of the sponge got the three teachers kinda wet . Then the seconded person from each line went and there went to sponge to each teachers body and it got the teacher’s soaking wet . Thirded after fourth after fifth it was finally my turn so dipped the sponge in the water and made sure it was wet and I threw it and it hit Mr Goodwin’s Stomach . While we were watching Paschal threw the wet sponge at Mr Goodwin at his Private part and everyone was saying ( OHHHHHHHHHH ) or they were laughing . Then Mr Somerville said let’s just let Mr Goodwin have a Moment . After that moment the fun countuined then Loseti and Julius threw the sponge at Mr Goodwin’s Face and all the kids were laughing or saying “ OHHHH “ and then seconds later Mr Somerville said Stop and then we had prize giving so Mr Somerville and Mr Jacobson had to pick three people from each team and from our team it was Paschal , Chance and Loseti and the prize was meant to be a chocolate but instead they let each of one of them to get a bucket and throw it anywhere on the teacher . So then Chance went first in our team and she poured the bucket of water on Mr Goodwin’s Head and then Paschal threw the water and it missed and we laughed then Loseti threw the water and it got Mr Goodwin well , after 3 kids from each team threw the water the whole fun was over .

Walking back to class in two lines Room Seven then Room Eight then Room Six after . We reached class so we all sat in the porch and then we all went inside and grabbed our morning tea .

I reckon this had to be the best fun time I had with all my friends . I would do this again also I would recommend this to all kids to have so much fun . Thank you for reading my writing .

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Task Description : This was our Writing test that we wrote about and what happened . Our Teacher told us we had 10 minutes to make sure our writing makes sense and double check its right . We had deiced to put our Writing test on our blog because we though it was a cool and fun experience to share .