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Showing posts with label Writing 2018. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing 2018. Show all posts

Thursday, 29 November 2018

What the Non Campers did While the Y6 were gone to Kawau Island Camp !!!!

W.A.L.T - To write a recount about camp or if you didn't go camp then what happened and what did you do ?

It all started on the Tuesday 20th of November when all the campers that had gone to the Year 6 Kawau Island Camp .  We heard from Mrs Sio that we were gonna do Fun and Exciting Stuff that was gonna happen that Week at School . That we were the official Non Campers that Week But to be honest it was actually fun without the Campers that Week . Want to Find out more on what we had done that week we'll keep reading to find out …..

The Next day on Wednesday we had started the fun which we had started off with Just Dance every morning to get fitness into our body every morning . After that we had started our cave art by making dark coffee and then we crunched up our paper to give it a cool effect then we had carefully painted the hot dark brown coffee onto our crunched paper . After we had painted our paper we had put it on the table to dry , next we went to go to Maori &we did flax plating and then we went Kiwi Sport in
the afternoon .

Next on Thursday we did our animals on our coffee art paper using our drawing’s that we had did on our cardboard paper and we had to draw our cave art animal drawings and stick man’s for our cave art painting that we did  . Then we watched the news while eating our juices that Mrs Sio had brought us . After lunch we had carried on with our art and then we had packed up then Mrs Sio had some juices lefted so then we sat in a circle and played spin the bottle and who ever the bottle landed on that the person who would get it and then once that game was finished we would play for lollies and then once that finish we played heads down thumbs up and then we were in time with the bell to go home , once Mrs Had dismiss us we all went home .
On Friday it was the best day ever why you ask it was because the day started with an Normal Assembly then we came back and we did just dance but after that everyone went to do Cool Maths Games and then Me and Shania was the only one lefted and we did the just dance together and then our friends joined us and then after morning tea we made Slime and we used Elmer's clear Glue and Borax and paint and food coloring and I wanted to make my slime clear and once my slime was done it turned out great . Next we made Ice Cream and Pancakes , Then we had a shared with all kinds of food like drinks and pizza and chips while our shared lunch was happening we were watching a movie ( Boss Baby ) . After lunch we did Henna on our hand and it was super fun . That was
the last day of Last but we all had a great time !!!

I Enjoyed every bit of of the whole of that week I enjoyed having fun and spending time with a mixture of class and my friends . I learnt heaps from what I have done in that time of week , Also I would like to say a Big Thank you to the Best Teacher in PES which is Mrs Sio for Staying with us and taking care of us and spending time with us and most importantly for making all this fun happen it wouldn't be possible if you wouldn't be here , THANK YOU SO MUCH !!!!

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Task Description : What we had to for this task is the first day back when the rest of the Campers had come back and the rest of the non campers had to write a recount about what the non campers did and what the Y6 campers did . We had a introduction , Body 1 , 2 , 3 and our Thank you's for those who made it happen and possible . So Basically this whole task was based on what we did . 

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALL THOSE PEOPLE WHO HAD MADE IT HAPPEN !!!! 

Thursday, 16 August 2018

Rubbish Clean Up Experience Recount - Writing 2018

Walt: structure a recount

These days in the world rubbish is not going so well . Anyways today in literacy class I thought it was going to be a normal day , but there was something mysterious going on. “ ummmm what’s happening “??? Have you ever heard something mysterious going on ??? Well keep tuned to find out ...

In class our teacher ( Mr Goodwin ) told the whole class of room seven literary that there was something boring to do and it was a BORING RECOUNT . Anyways Mr Goodwin told us the rules of walking and being Out Of School Then we got our shoes or just go in bare feet . Next step was to go line up in two lines then walk shoulder to shoulder to the person next to you , walking in a class towards the breeze, but unfortunately we had to stop Because Mr Goodwin said I will be back quick ( well something around about that ) then he came back with long big black plastic bags . I was wondering what we were gonna do . So we walked in two lines to the brezze then I told my friend Leilani “ Oi I think we are going to hop in the bag and jump to the other end but on the other end I was thinking that we were picking up rubbish , Finally we had reached the bottom field of our school and Mr Goodwin said “ It looks like there is not that much rubbish but he said neverminded lets do it on the Pt England Reserve”, I was Happy cause we got to go out of school to go on the Pt England Reserve “ Slowly Walking like 5cm forward we had to stop because we had to get in groups of 5 or 6 and my group was Chance , Leilani and myself but so sadly we got split up because there was only 3 of us , so my new group was Inga , Jedida , Amria , Roshaan and Myself.

Moving on our teacher ( Mr Goodwin ) explained where the boundaries where and, if we go out our whole team would get disqualification . The first zone was to the fence and to the far goldpost and when Mr Goodwin said “ Go !!!! “ My Whole Team ran and I saw lots of rubbish sitting in a pile of hay . A couple of seconds later our teacher blowed the whistle . Then we moved on to our next location which was the gold post and the walkway , but just in front of it , anyways seconds later our teacher blowed the whistle again . Next we went to the last location which was the next part was the bottom filed back in our school grounds , my team rubbish and most people went to the tree’s behind the bike track and more , Mr Goodwin below the whistle again . Our teacher was even kind enough to give us a another chance, so he told us “ the final place was our top field's so my team ran as fast as we can to pick up rubbish , Me and Marika saw the packet of shapes and we raced to it and I Picked it up and Marika said No I got it but it was already in my hand, next our teacher below the final whistle again .

The challenge was all over but we had to sit in our team lines with the plastic bags in front of the line . But there was a judge and the judge was Mrs Haare . So Mrs Haare cheeked the first group ( I gotta say they picked up a lot of rubbish ) . Next Mr Haare checked the next group ( It was Clean Pick up ) . Next Mrs Haare Checked the next team’s Bag ( I Thought it was Good ) . My group was the Next Group so Mrs Haare Checked though it , ( I was thinking our team rubbish bag was pretty clean but until Mr Haare Pulled up a Piece of Bark and I said Who put that it there ??? ) After that is was the lucky last team so Mrs Haare checked what was inside of there bag and she pulled out a jandal and everyone laughed because why would u put a jandel . Anyways Mrs Haare announced the Winners and it was Sonnia’s group . I felt happy that they won because they did well .

When the experience had finished I was proud of myself because I made a big difference compared to last time where there were lots of rubbish, look at it now it’s clean the Reverse to Pt England School Fields , even though my team didn't win it was a amazing experience also it was for a good cause because we had helped our community . I definitely recommend this for to others to do also to help there community by doing something little like picking up rubbish .


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Task Description : Today room seven literacy had to do a recount on our rubbish clean up experience . What I mean by that is where our teacher Mr Goodwin took us out for a walk and did a competition against each other to see who would pick up the most rubbish in 5 location 's . Once those 5 location 's were done the Special Judge will  announced who won . 

Friday, 3 August 2018

Write the Scene - Writing 2018

Walt: think about dialogue between characters
Task Description : For this Task we had to write the Lines of two Characters saying something to each other . Next we had to find a pair to work with and see which one that they want to do . Next we had to practice the lines just in case our Teacher Mr Goodwin would pick us to act . What I mean by that was Mr Goodwin would pick a couple of group's to act out the lines of the scene in front of the class outside.

Friday, 27 July 2018

Immersion Assembly .

Walt: using exciting language.

On Monday the 23th of July it was the First day back to school for Term 3 .  The Whole of Pt England School had to come to the Hall ready for an Immersion Assembly, We saw different kinds of Movies from all the Teams . Has your school ever had a Immersion Assembly while First day back to school ????

The School Theme for the Whole of this Term “Move Ya Body” . So Basically what I am thinking about this theme for the Term  is kinda about Dancing , Movement , Fitness because that's what The Teacher’s had did on the Stage .  Beyonce Burt as known as Mr Burt was Dancing on the stage along with Mr Somerville and Mr Jacobson .  I feel like this theme is more known for  Eating Healthy , Exercise , Movement , Hydration , Being Energetic and Active and much more . 

Team 4’s Topic is about Fitness ,  Healthy Life and being Active  .  Team 4 ‘s movie was about Being Active while creating fun Games . What I think about this movie it was great and it was funny too . My favourtive part of the movie was the part where Mrs Heger was doing the plank but when the camera turned she was standing up on the blue screen it was omozing . 

In my Opinion I really hope to learn about more of Exercises while being safe and to learn about eating healthy and more .  I Would want to go for more walk’s and scroll while we are walking . We should do that more often to get some exercise instead of sitting around . Also I would like to sometime’s go for a run or jog to somewhere then come back to class just to get some Air in our Lungs and to have a Breath also to have some exercise. 


I think for the whole New Term Theme Overall was Pretty Good To Be Honest . I Think that was a good choice to pick for the term because lately we need to get some exercise instead of sitting indoors . If I was to rate the Overall Theme I would Like to rate it 8.5 out of 10 . 

Task Description : Room 7 Litcery had to do a recount about What had happened on the Frist day of school which was an Immersion Assembly . First we had to write an Introduction then , Body Paragraph 1 , Body Paragraph 2 , Body Paragraph 3 , and last but not least an  Conclusion to end the Recount . 



Thursday, 5 July 2018

My Take on Little Red Riding Hood - Writing 2018

Walt: write a narrative using descriptive language.



Task Description : For this Task in Room 8 Literacy we had to create our own story of My Take on  Little Red Riding Hood . We had to create a Plan for the Beginning , Middle and the End and then start the story what you have planned to start with . Hope you enjoy my Story . BYEEEEEEE

Friday, 9 February 2018

Duffy Assembly At Pt England School !!!

Duffy Assembly Recount
WALT: Write a recount with the right structure

WALT: Use interesting words to make your recount more exciting



Introduction :
Have you ever had a Duffy Assembly at your school before ?? We'll find out ………….
I am going to tell you what had happened at Pt England School on Wednesday the 7th
of February . .  .  . . . . . . . . Anyways in the Afternoon at Pt England
School Team 4 ( Year 4 , 5 , 6 ) and Team 5 (  Year 7 & 8 ) had to go to a Duffy
Assembly . There were three Actors their names were Melanie, Ashley, Duffy .


Body 1 :
What had happened was Room  6 , 7 , 8 went into there maths classes to line up in two
lines to go to the hall to watch the Duffy Assembly Next  was we had to find out where
Team 4 & 5 were going to sit .   Team 4 & 5 sat down which it had went Team 5 at
the Back and Team 4 at the front . Once Teams 4 & 5 had sat down  .
The Actors Melanie, Ashley, Duffy had set up a Duffy Show for Teams 4 & 5 .
Melanie, Ashley, Duffy said what the show was going to be about and it was
The Story about Bullying.


Body 2 :
So what happened was Melanie was a Girl who got bullied by the Mean Gir
l Ashley mostly everyday . Ashley took Melanie’s Lunch and Ate it and Melanie had
no lunch all because of Ashley also Ashley was using mean words towards Melanie
and Ashley Wouldn't let Melanie play with her and much more  . Then once Duffy
knew that Ashley was bullying Melanie Duffy stood up to Ashley .


Body 3 :
My Favourtive  part was when Duffy stood up for Melanie when Duffy knew that
Melanie was getting bullied by Ashley  so then Duffy Stood up to Ashley .
I think the main Message was to Not Bully Others and Help them .


Conclusion :
So what happened was Melanie was a Girl who got bullied by the Mean Girl Ashley
mostly everyday . Ashley took Melanie’s Lunch and Ate it and Melanie had no lunch
all because of Ashley also Ashley was using mean words towards Melanie and
Ashley Wouldn't let Melanie play with her and much more  . Then once Duffy
had knew that Ashley was bullying Melanie Duffy had stood up to Ashley .

The End

Task Description : For this task in Literacy we had to write a recount all about The
Duffy Assembly on the Wednesday the 7th of February . What is a Recount???
For an Example if something so special or an event or something that happened your
teacher would tell you to retell what had happened on that day so that
is what is a Recount .