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Wednesday 6 November 2019

An Miracle - Pre Test Narrative Writing - Choose It Writing

 An Miracle 
As Caldoria the ballerina was dancing gracefully on stage with her beautiful lyrical solo.
But as the producer awaiting on the side of the stage wanting to get her attention because something was urgent and she needed to go ASAP. Seconds later he finally got her attention she was dancing beautifully until something caught her eye so she had to rush off stage and she suddenly tripped over a prop that another dancer was using for her solo the judges asked if she was okay and Caldroia said “yes”. 

After she got to the producer told her the hospital rang and said you need to go because your dad is having a huge heart problem !!! As she ran with tears running down her face she was heartbroken she wonder if something worster was going to happen . After 25 minutes she got to the hospital the doctor located her to her grandpa’s room which was level 3 room 24 . Her grandpa wasn’t there untill the nurse said he is in the x ray room then after that he will go in the operations room for surgery Caldoria was SHOCKED she didn’t know that it was going to be like this . 

10 minutes later grandpa came back to his room and saw Caldoria sitting on the chair and Caldoria said “ Grandpa I’m sorry for all I’ve done and all I want now is for you to still live and too create more memoirs I love you Grandpa <3 “ Grandpa said “ I love you Caldoria <3 “ But then the nurse said I have good news for you “ Your grandpa is good to go and he doesn’t need to go for surgery but now but you just need to keep an eye out just in case this happens again!” Caldoria said “ Thank you Thank you for your hospitality looking after my grandpa “ The Nurse repiled “ No worries “ As Caldoria walked happily with her grandpa out the Auckland hospital and drove back to competion to see who made it to the grand finals .

As they got there Caldoria just made it and the Judges said the two grand finalist is….. Caldoria and Bella ! Caldoria was over the moon and said “ This day couldn’t was an miracle and a roller coaster ride for sure !!! “ then Caldoria said a Thank you speach and drove back home with her Grandpa and started choreographing another temporaly solo . 

To be Continued …..

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