School Hours Persuasive Writing

Meaning of Colors = Purple for Hook & Green for Opinion & Yellow for Reason’s & Blue for Examples/Facts . 

Intro

Is school hours good that it's long or not ?

In my opinion school should start at 8:30am and finish at 3.00pm because its a reasonable time to end and finish school and you get a lot of Education done while your at school . 

P1 Good - 

Helping/Understanding

For an Example Some Kids seem to struggle on understanding there learning online and if there stuck they really need help but doesn’t know what to do they seem to sit there and not do anything , that's why most kids prefer to go to school and get help from a teacher face to face that way they can help the kids fully understand rather than being stuck and not getting anywhere . 

Some online study sites that kids use some sites can’t really tell the kids on what they are actually looking for but on the other hand teachers help the kids when they need help instead of the kid searching for the missing information and killing time . 

P2 Better -

Learning / Education

The Time period for school is good because the long hours of the school day helps the kids learn more and has a good shot at there future .

If the time period has been cut to shorter hours for the school days the kids may not be learning as much as you think they are the longer the day the more they learn but the shorter the day the less they will be able to learn new things but not only that in school we have morning tea and lunchtime and that cost up to nearly 2 hours of the whole school day and less time of learning . 

Learning will never be a regret because as you grow up and wanting a career or a job you have the knowledge to get that job since you learnt a lot in school from the time period that you have for learning .  

P3 Best  -

 Better Future 

For an Example , having no Education by your side and haven’t learnt anything about learning that's a BIG regret because once you want a job you haven't study about it . Education is one of your important needs why you ask because it helps you get the job you want and if they ask you did you learn anything about that pariteler job and you already learnt about because you took the time to study about it .

Learning plays a BIG part of your life as you really need it not only for jobs and careers but also for your own goods and if your children need help on there homework you can help them as because you studied when you were supposed to and have the knowledge to do it .

Conclusion

At the end of it Education plays a big part in your life as I said , you really need to succeed in life or not to succeed in life either way it's your choice to pick whether you want to succeed or not . But in my Opinion every kid and adult should learn more and will have a bright future ahead of them and still to come!