2 sides of the Enchanted Tree ( 1st Draft )

            

Begin Writing Here:

Lilly , Anna , Rosie and Jazzelle badly wanted to go on a Adventure , we didn’t know what kind of an adventure but any kind will do . As we walked and walked we saw a forest we all wondered just for a second if we should or shouldn’t go in the forest , Me and Anna Agree to go but expect Rosie and Jazzelle .

Lilly said “ Lets go its adventure isn’t this what we wanted to do “ Anna Replied “ Yes Man just come “ Jazzelle Replied “ Well i’m going “ Rosie Replied “ But there is a Sign saying its Enchanted Forest “ Anna Reptiles “ It's an Adventure okay ? “ Rosie Replied “ Fine “ As they walked into the Enchanted Forest they saw that the sky was starting to change but they didn’t know why  …………..

But then after 10 minutes of walking Rosie Spotted something that caught her eye she said “ I see something like a Big tree let's go and explore it ?

“ Lilly Replied “ Okay “

Then off they went but as they got closer and closer as we saw the whole thing of where the sky was changing . They all wondered how come half of the tree was night and the other half is morning ,

Lilly said “ Something doesn’t seem right Girls “

Anna said “ I know right “

so they went closer until Jazzelle and Rosie said “ Look there’s a Door “

Anna and Lilly said “ Ok , Lets go inside “

so they went inside went up the stairs and founded heaps of food just sitting on the table just waiting to be eaten .  Frist of all Anna Said Grace , after grace was said they started eating the food there was so much to chose from ( Fruits , Seafood , Pies , Chips , Chocolate , Drinks and more )

Task Description :We are learning to add dialogue to our writing but we are doing that in our 2nd draft , but this is my 1st draft and all I wrote .