Lilly said “ Lets go its adventure isn’t this what we wanted to do ?? “
“ Anna Replied “ Yes Man just come “
Jazzelle Replied “ Well I’m going “
Rosie Replied “ But there is a Sign saying its Enchanted Forest “
Anna Replied “ It's an Adventure okay ?? “
Rosie Replied “ Fine “
As they walked into the Enchanted Forest they saw that the sky was starting to change but they didn’t know why …………..
But then after 10 minutes of walking Rosie Spotted something that caught her eye.
“ I see something like a Big tree let's go and explore it ?
“ Okay “ Lilly Replied
Then off they went but as they got closer and closer as we saw the whole thing of where the sky was changing . They all wondered how come half of the tree was night and the other half is morning ,
Lilly said “ Something doesn’t seem right Girls “
“ I know right “ Anna Replied
“ Look there’s a Door “ Jazzelle and Rosie replied .
Anna and Lilly said “ Ok , Lets go inside “
They founded the JACKPOT just heaps of food just awaiting for them . But most importantly Anna said Grace , once grace was said they started eating the food there was so much to chose from ( Fruits , Seafood , Pies , Chips , Chocolate , Drinks and more )
After they had eaten half of the food they decided to save the rest . They all went to bed upstairs expect for one person that was Anna . Anna had a weird feeling about something , something strange that was going to happen on half of the world in the night . Anna was starting to fall asleep but all of a sudden we heard someone’s footsteps , she was awaken and wanted to find out who was there . Anna when to hide quietly awaiting for the person to enter the Enchanted tree , 5 minutes later the person enter the house …..
“WHAT ARE YOU DOING !!!! “
The person replied “ Ooooo Nothing “
“ Well it doesn’t look like nothing to me “
The person replied “ Can I come in and get some food “
“ Well if you want some food then you will have to get past me first “
The Person Replied “ Okay then i’ll LEAVE THEN “
“ You better LEAVE “
Anna said to herself “ FAR OUT MAN SO MUCH DRAMA! "
As Anna went upstairs to wake up Rosie to guard the door at night while anna gets some rest after drama . Rosie when to the front door ( Technically there was no door but she just went to go guard it ) . Anyways Rosie was dozing off to sleep slowly but then Jazzelle woke up and asked Rosie .
“Here you go sleep and I will Guard it “
Anna Replied “ Yep , Thanks “
Anna went to sleep while Rosie was guarding the door until they all woke up to go to the half of the tree side which was morning . But something told Lilly that her and the girls should really be solving it this weird problem .....
"Girls I think we should solve this problem since we are here "
The Girls replied " Yea sure why not seem's fun "
Jazzelle saw something , it looked like a small jar that just looked like the enchanted tree , Half morning and night time .
" Girls I think you would want to come and see this "
The girls shouted " Coming "
After the girls had reached where Jazzelle and seen something "
Lilly and Anna Said " What should we do with it "
Rosie yelled " Let's SMASH IT ! "
Jazzelle said " Maybe that's the solution from this Enchanted Tree from having half morning and night "
All the girls Agreed to the statement Jazzelle said .
As Rosie grabbed the jar and threw it with Excitement onto the ground with glass coming out and spreading everywhere "
"Look the sky's changing to morning "
Lilly Replied " Shes right "
With the sky changing to only morning the problem was solved and no more half morning or night just a normal tree like every other , It was a miracle for the Girls and they of course had to celebrate the good Adventure .
The End
Task Description : We are learning to add dialogue to our writing . We maded our first daft that we wrote and then partner up with a buddy and make changes to our writing .
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