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Tuesday, 11 February 2020

S.E.E Writing

WALT: understand the elements of an explanation

Element 1 - Picking up Rubbish:
“Be part of the solution, not the pollution.”
By being part of the solution is to not litter around the places we go to. Littering isn’t good for our home we call “Earth” because it will end up bad and polluted with all our trash lying around and obviously some people who sees it ain't gonna pick it up because it looks unpleasant and its not there's so they say “it's not there problem”.For example, one day I went to the beach with some of my family and next to us was a big family having fish and chips, but after they finished eating the family left they’re rubbish flying everywhere polluting our earth! I had to pick up all they’re rubbish and throw it in the bin. A While after I was picking up they’re rubbish I say “It ain’t even hard to pick up your own rubbish and throw it in the bin”

Element 2 - Chuck it in right bin
“Sometimes you just have to chuck it in the right bin” Be a tidy kiwi by picking up rubbish and throwing it in the right bin, don’t be a dirty kiwi and walk past the rubbish and the bin just pick up the rubbish and throw it in the bin. For example, one time me and my family went out for a walk down to the beach because we didn’t live far from it so we went for a walk down the beach, while we were walking I see lots of rubbish on the ground right next to the bin.I’m just looking to see if anyone will pick it up, but while we were walking I see a person running and I thought they will pick it up. But they didn't, they just ran right past it like they didn’t see it, so me and my little sisters went across the road and picked up all the rubbish and threw it in the bin.

Element 3 - Don’t just do it at school (Homes & Streets etc.)
“The best way to not feel hopeless is to get up and do something. Don’t wait for good things to happen to you. If you go out and make some good things happen, you will fill the world with hope, you will fill yourself with hope.” ― Barack Obama. Being a Role Model is to always be the person and the things you should always be the same and never change when you are at school or home or wherever you are! For example when you put your rubbish in the bin at school you also don’t need to do it just at school but as well as at home and on your street your house it will make your street and area you call home beautiful!!

Element 4 - Teach Others (Family & Neighbors etc.)
“There is no exercise better for the heart than reaching down and lifting people up.”
― John Holmes.Teaching others around you will really help out your community and the area around you to help keep it tidy and clean for when visitors or local people come it will be a Tidy place for everyone to go to. For example, while I was walking back home from school I see across the road a family walking back home, while they were walking there was rubbish on the ground the mother and the kids walked past it, but only one person picked up the rubbish and it was the youngest child there she picked up the rubbish. But the mother told her to “Leave the rubbish” but she didn’t listen instead she told her why she was picking up the rubbish. 

Task Description : This week Room 1 Literacy is writing and learning again about how to write an Explanation Piece of Writing upon which it includes S.E.E. My Buddy was Nevaeh!! Which means S is the meaning of our Statement which is Blue. E is the meaning for our explanation which is in Green. E is Meaning for our Example which is meaning and coloured in Bright Pink! This was meant for our whole week for our writing task but then we had extra time so we deiced to finish the whole thing!

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