WALT: Write a narrative using dialogue.
WALT meaning We are learning to..
As the night was ending in a miracle of peaceful joy of a fairy tale! Until they all took the wrong turn on their way home.
The Horses went crazy , the Girl went flying while still holding a grudge on the handles , 2 animals came out of nowhere , the pumpkin was massive and everything was just a mess! The funny looking Cinderella girl wondered what could go wrong! She had confusion along with her thoughts and wondered if it was a curse?! That’s right her name wasn’t “ The funny looking Cinderella” her name was Emma Faith Valentina.
Emma did conduct herself as a weird person , but that anyhow didn’t reflect who she was and what she wanted to become when her time has come to be what she always wanted to be!
Until she couldn’t hold any longer with the way her grip was weak. She let go of the handle and there she went just about close to the ground. Emma landed chest first towards the hard grass. As slow as a Turtle Emma slowly got up and the Carriage with the White Horses kept going without nothing that could be able to stop them.
Emma didn’t care; she just wanted to figure out what happened and why?!
Emma said to herself “ WHY WHY WHY OUT OF ALL PEOPLE IT HAPPENED TO ME! “ as she said that she started to cry and have fear of what would happen. All alone Emma was out in the mysterious forest with white fog hard to see barely anything in a night of the full moon.
Was Emma not only alone? Was she with someone who stalked her? Did Emma die in the woods without help ? What will happen next ?
To Be Continued ….
Task Description :
This week Room 1 Literacy is learning or rewriting a narrative but adding dialog into it. The picture giving is to help given a better thought of our narrative to write about like an inspiration. This is just a short story but I hope to finish my second part of my writing in my free time.
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