W.A.L.T : Write a Narrative
W.A.L.T is meaning for " What we are learning about "
Image Attribution / Story Starter - Pobble365
It had been three days since it had gone missing. One minute he had held it in his hand, the next it had vanished. How could it just have disappeared? It had been right in front of his eyes!
He had been warned about what would happen if he lost it.
His mission had been to guard the key with his life, ever since they visited him last summer.
Adam had always had a detective’s instinct. They had told him as much. He had been chosen because he had certain skills, and he would need them more than ever now.
Only one clue had seemingly been left, which was sat on the living room table.
Holding the magnifying glass up to his eye, Adam began to investigate…
As Adam was closely looking at his magnifying glass towards his eyes he saw a glimpse of something keeping an close eye on him. Adam was curious so he started to lean forward.
As he leaned forward his father looked at him with auspiciousness.
Not long, his father said “ Adam, is everything old and fine over there? “ ''
Adam replied strangely '' umm yes “
His father was still suspicious and quite weirded out.Adam started to worry. He knew that his own father was going to keep an eye on him considering they were in the same room.
Adam curiously looked back at his magnifying glass closely and saw eyes on top of the self in there secretive home library. He wondered to himself if he was paranoid so he looked away and looked back at the same place and it had randomly disappeared!
Adam had one thing lefted in mind to tell the truth…. But instead Adam didn’t give up that easily. Later 15 minutes went past without Adam knowing considering he had to look for that Key.
Once again his father said “ Look Adam, just tell me what’s up, it's been 15 minutes?! “
Adam looked at his father with a fake grin “ nothing father “
Adam started to get worried. He tried to the best of his abilities and looked everywhere but nothing came to mind. He tried to rewind back to when he first lost the key but his brain cells couldn’t come to a conclusion. Adam came to a conclusion to tell his father…
Adam sat next to his father saying in a worried voice “ Father I….I….I “ mubluming
Adam's father replied with concern “ What are you trying to say Adam? “
Adam said “ Father, I lost the key and I'm really Sorry! “ (Tearing up abit)
Adam's father was in SHOCK! He told Adam “ Adam what do you mean? “
Over 4 minutes Adam told the very beginning of the story upon which it had vanished in front of his eyes! At first his Father didn’t believe him! Adam knew it was a ridiculous story to believe but who knew who would have believed him and his stories right?!
Adam's Father told Adam with a bit of anger “ Look for that key immediately! "
Adam replied quietly “ Yes, father “
10 minutes passed… Adam struggled to find the key.
As minutes passed by, to a few hours gone, Adam still didn’t find the key.
Adam started to sweat, his father fell asleep. Adam tried very hard to find the key, he even sat down and did some yoga.
It was a hard, difficult , mysterious mission still yet to be solved.
To Be Continued….
It had been three days since it had gone missing. One minute he had held it in his hand, the next it had vanished. How could it just have disappeared? It had been right in front of his eyes!
He had been warned about what would happen if he lost it.
His mission had been to guard the key with his life, ever since they visited him last summer.
Adam had always had a detective’s instinct. They had told him as much. He had been chosen because he had certain skills, and he would need them more than ever now.
Only one clue had seemingly been left, which was sat on the living room table.
Holding the magnifying glass up to his eye, Adam began to investigate…
As Adam was closely looking at his magnifying glass towards his eyes he saw a glimpse of something keeping an close eye on him. Adam was curious so he started to lean forward.
As he leaned forward his father looked at him with auspiciousness.
Not long, his father said “ Adam, is everything old and fine over there? “ ''
Adam replied strangely '' umm yes “
His father was still suspicious and quite weirded out.Adam started to worry. He knew that his own father was going to keep an eye on him considering they were in the same room.
Adam curiously looked back at his magnifying glass closely and saw eyes on top of the self in there secretive home library. He wondered to himself if he was paranoid so he looked away and looked back at the same place and it had randomly disappeared!
Adam had one thing lefted in mind to tell the truth…. But instead Adam didn’t give up that easily. Later 15 minutes went past without Adam knowing considering he had to look for that Key.
Once again his father said “ Look Adam, just tell me what’s up, it's been 15 minutes?! “
Adam looked at his father with a fake grin “ nothing father “
Adam started to get worried. He tried to the best of his abilities and looked everywhere but nothing came to mind. He tried to rewind back to when he first lost the key but his brain cells couldn’t come to a conclusion. Adam came to a conclusion to tell his father…
Adam sat next to his father saying in a worried voice “ Father I….I….I “ mubluming
Adam's father replied with concern “ What are you trying to say Adam? “
Adam said “ Father, I lost the key and I'm really Sorry! “ (Tearing up abit)
Adam's father was in SHOCK! He told Adam “ Adam what do you mean? “
Over 4 minutes Adam told the very beginning of the story upon which it had vanished in front of his eyes! At first his Father didn’t believe him! Adam knew it was a ridiculous story to believe but who knew who would have believed him and his stories right?!
Adam's Father told Adam with a bit of anger “ Look for that key immediately! "
Adam replied quietly “ Yes, father “
10 minutes passed… Adam struggled to find the key.
As minutes passed by, to a few hours gone, Adam still didn’t find the key.
Adam started to sweat, his father fell asleep. Adam tried very hard to find the key, he even sat down and did some yoga.
It was a hard, difficult , mysterious mission still yet to be solved.
To Be Continued….
Task Description :
This week Room 1 Literacy is learning or rewriting a narrative. The picture giving is to help given a better thought of our narrative to write about. Please keep in mind that the blue font is the story starter meaning I didn't write it because it was a story started that came off a site. However the black writing font is my carried on story towards the story starter! I am hoping to finish of my writing whenever I have Spare time to finish it off.
Overall Reflection:
My overall Reflection I would have to say it was a great task to do. I enjoyed writing this Narrative because I haven't wrote one in a long time!
What can I do differently next time:
What can I do differently next time:
I think I would change the way I thought about it and maybe changed it abit, but it otherwise it was overall great!
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