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Friday 15 November 2019

Mystical Adventure Part 1 - Keyhole Narrative Writing

Mystical Adventure Part 1 

It was a typical walk while the beautiful sun was setting through the Island of Macoryin located in Russia . Josh and Joseph wanted to explore and have an adventure throughout Russia . As Lina , Josh , Melissa and Joseph were having a good time , Josh caught a gleam of an eye catching his attention as he yelled out “ Guys come look what I found! “ As they all came running back to Joseph , Lina  was shocked and wondered to herself how come its so dark ? Melissa & Josh was keen to go in but they didn’t know about the others whether they wanted to or not , so Melissa asked the whole group “ Do you’s want to go in because me and Josh wanna 

“ With in fear Lina said  I don't know guys “
“ Joseph said yup Im keen “ 
With the whole group all keen to go inside they all awaited for Lina but then Joseph said “ Its Alright Lina you’ll be fine just stick with me “
Lina Replied “ Okay thx ”
As they all took a couple of steps into the dark tunnel they couldn’t see anything since it was really pitch dark black ahead of them . But until Lina tumbled Joseph caught her they both looked each other in the eye but then Josh and melissa said “ Oshhhh Come on you two its not a love story “ giggling a bit 
“Coming” said Lina ( blushing ) and Joseph 
They all thought they were getting nowhere until Josh spotted a light ahead of him and said “ Look there’s a hint of light “ 
They all ran towards it but then they all said with supsioucnest “ What’s that ? “
They all looked at each other awkwardly like they never looked at each other before , They took step by step moving slowly towards the weird looking ship with a part of land leaving a big hole for several eyes to see . They all wonder what should they do so so they all jump and they all barley made it into the ship and once they opened the door and took a couple of steps the door closed on its own!
How could that have happened ?

Task Description : This week our task was based on another narrative meaning we are trying to get better and better at writing narratives and picking different kinds of topics and making our stories more interesting . We had to tell what will happen in our story and weather if there are one whole story or weather there will be parts towards our story. Don't forget to stay tuned for Part 2 coming very soon !

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