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Thursday 20 February 2020

Unorganized Explanation Writing " Ways upon how to be a Good Daughter "

WALT: structure an explanation.


" Ways upon how to be a Good Daughter "

This writing will take place upon “Ways upon how to be a Good Daughter” In saying that this writing will show and explain upon how to be a good daughter to your parents!

A very big thing that shows and explains is your Body Language.Your body language really shows a lot even when your mad or happy it shows and most people can read it depending upon how you hold up yourself.Whenever you get asked to do something or get asked to go somewhere and your body language shows it all and your parents. However It makes them feel like there feeling something else coming from you, if you know the feeling then yeap that's the one. That's why you should always have a good attitude and body language to your parents!

Another way to be a good daughter is to talk nicely to your parents. By telling them how much you appreciate them, and answering back in a positive manner you are showing your parents how much they mean to you.When your parents ask you to do something it is important that you listen and respond in a timely and respectful manner. For example, when mum asks you to put away the laundry, you should immediately respond by saying, “yes mum” as you stand up and put the laundry away without a scowl on your face.

Another way to show that you are a good daughter is by your actions. By being helpful around the house you are showing your parents that you respect them. For example, when you keep your bed made and your room clean you are showing that you respect your living space. This also comes into play when you complete your chores without being asked. So, when you wake up in the morning or get home from school, immediately vacuum the house, put away the dishes and take out the rubbish. 


It is very important to always show kindness towards your parents. Although this can be difficult at times, it is important to show kindness to your parents because it shows that you respect them. For example, when you really want to go somewhere with your friends and your parents tell you that you have to stay home and look after your little siblings, it is important to remember that your parents have your best interests in mind. 


Anyone has the ability to be a good daughter. By showing kindness, listening to your parents, and being helpful you are showing your parents that you love and respect them. What else can you do in your life to be a good daughter?

Highlighting Meaning:
Blue is meaning for the Statements , Green is meaning for the Explanation , Pink is meaning for Examples. The Blue Green and Pink Highlighting is meaning for S.E.E! The yellow highlights is meaning for all the connectives in this Explanation!

Task Description :
Please take note that majorly of this writing isn't mine its actually a former ex Pt England Student from last year that attended our school but now is at college. This week we are main based on Explanation writing and revising it for all the year 7's last which was me and other people as well as the year 7's to get better at it than last year. The only parts that I have written was the First Information Paragraph , Introduction as well as the Title and the rest was from the Former Pt England student!
Overall Reflection :
This was a great piece of writing written and I thought it was a good task upon depending upon how I would reorganized this writing and I would say it was a good writing task to do.
What would I do better next time:
I think that I would finish the task on time but also I would like to get better of an understanding upon the deeper of the Explanation platform!

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